Kiss In The Rain

Awwwwwwwwww!!! This was really cute! You did a really good job capturing the moment. :D. Really there was only one thing: you have to put breaks between point of views. ...

I must say, I disagree with BM. It doesn't really seem all that cliche. I mean, of course there is the "I'LL GET REVENGE!" thing going on, but you do ...

Hey, BigBadBear. This is quite the piece. :D I really liked it! Ryukun pretty much got the grammar, so I'll just add to the compliments. I liked it, really I ...

Hey! How goes it? Hmm, I think every one got the editing done... so I'm just going to tell you that I really liked it! :D. It's interesting, and I ...

Hey there, Spiffygirl. I think you have something really good going here. I like the idea, it is very original. You have a wonderful vocabulary for one so young, (haha, ...

Hello, Echo! You said to ignore the caps and the (...) so I did. And because of that...I have no idea how to edit your post! Isn't that awesome?! Okay, ...

Hmm, I do indeed like this. The plot line does seem a little typical, but if you add some good twists in the plot line, it could be very different. ...

Ahh, wonderful chapter, as always. The first part made me laugh. :D. Do boys really do that? Compare armpit and chest hair with each other? I'm sure they do... it ...

Ahh, wonderfully vague. *giggles* Very nice job. I liked it a lot :D. I like your characters, and the whole reliving-the-crash-on-T.V. thing was pretty cool; like being taped in a ...

Hmm, I really don't know, KJ It made a lot of sense, really. (Rain check on the grammar, J.C.R, hon. ;)) It was very interesting. Like a Dream becoming Reality? ...

Oh, wow. This is truely remarkable. :). I'm excited for the next installment, if there is one, I mean. Which I'm sure there will be. But, anyhow, this was really ...

That’s it for today I think, though Dan. As he proceeded, to mop the sweat from his brow. He idly meandered his way back to the horse cart. Exhausted from ...

A soft breeze, cool and fragrant swept against her face. The pleasant sound of fabric nearby tussleling and flapping in the breeze. Spoiled by the offensive screech of a sea ...

My eyes snapped open and looked in terror at the person in front of me. A woman with red fiery hair crouched in front of me. "A woman with red, ...

Darkness, nothing, the world was empty except for a cool sinister slither. That trickled down from her forehead, which pounded angrily. This should be one sentence. If you wanted it ...